Sunday, October 2, 2011

Insights From Reading The New Document

This new primary source document that I have for my second essay is a video of the Hugh Herr commencement speech that took place in May of this year. Hugh Herr discussed how he overcame a terrible accident. His legs now are not his biological legs and how far technology has come. Technology can even do something so wonderful as to give Herr the capability to walk again after having his legs amputated. His entire speech is thick with inspiration and motivation. 

Comparing the two sources I think the new Hugh Herr speech was a better commencement speech. It encouraged students to keep holding on to hope and to show how important our future technology is. The old document did not carry enough information and the speech could have been longer I think. The new speech is much more modern and discusses technology whereas technology was never a big thing back when the old speech took place.

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